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Old 10-25-05, 11:40 PM   #27
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Voted For: Theory

Drakel:
he's already uncertain, and hasn't yet dropped his verse
this annoying kid aint german, but i know this brats the wurst
this was cool wordplay
you're not at all clever, and far from being witty
shit, your stuff is more bazaar than middle east cities
lmfao, nice son
see, i know you're a fruit, damn, your stuff never varies
and you're in a jam now, cause you're about to be berried
word, played but you flipped it well and shit son
shit, you world's coming down, there aint nobody feeling
and the only secure hold you have on things in your hands on the ceiling
nah, didn't like this one
you alias' make me fucking sick, so here's a quick sketch
people aren't throwing up their hands...just throwing up, wretch
played as hell son, nah

Overall: You started off with 2 dope wordplay bars I liked, but then started to fade, I could see where you were going with that ceiling line, but it didn't connect, and then you had a few played lines, one you flipped cool and shit, the other was just wack and played.

Theory:
Theory'll stomp this bitch, take gold, n' leave this whore last
& when ya named after dragons
...it aint hard to get medieval on your ass
lol, ok
But fuck dragon characteristics, my punches got ya duckin back
& I aint referin to forked tongues when I say hiss lines are fuckin wack
lmfao, nice wordplay son
The hell you win battles? I'll call ya a cheater, cuz you are
The moment I saw ya name, from the beggining, I knew it was DR
this shit is kinda played, but you flipped it cool
Straight bashin this faggot dude, i'll toss the whore
Cuz I aint referin to ya avatar
...when i'm dragon you across the floor
played shit, but i'll guess it's a personal, but we can't even see the dudes avatar when we read this, so =/
Fuck drake, if someones gettin owned, you can bet it's him
But I guess i'll take a veyetal loss, as long as I get the win
lmfao, dope word/nameplay on his alias yo

You had some good shit, really good verse here but you had some un-original lines, but you flipped them in an original way son. Closer was dopeness. The drago-on line, was nah, cuz it was played and you can't tell what his avatar is when you look it dosn't show, nah mean? But.....

Due to more consistancy. vote= Theory
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