yo first of all WHY THE FUCK AINT YOU SIGNED AGAIN?

and yup im listening to your step up song and that song is destined to get slapped by my two twevles in my car, LOL word that song is sick


anyway

this song was coo it started out real nice and ended nice

1verse, you started out with my attention and i like how you didnt have an intro when the beat droppped you just ripped it, LOL your lyrics where real nice, i love songs that talk about this type of shit, word nothing more to say ecept im gonna download it


chorus, i wasnt sure when the chorus came in, you should have added some eckos, or somehting, and other than that it was dope and kept my attention literally i stopped everything i was diong and just listened

2nd verse, you once again lept my attention and spit some dope ass lyrics i would say i liked your first verse best, dont know why but i did, but some of your lines where mad, dope and you flow switched up a lil witch kept me staring at my CPU screen and listening

3rd...i liked this verse best, real dope shit, i liek when poeple talk abuot hti s type of shit, LOL wordness, this was definitly ment to be at a club or some type of function...i owuld now say this was your best verse, now that i think of it.....

yo i couldnt really find any major flaws or really any flaws but if i listned alot more i would find somehting ...i dont know, LOL dope shit

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