Hmm.....Im Not Sure Your Imagery is Dope,Well Its All Dope But It Strays Off Flow A Bit....
Structure is good Keep it Like That
Imagery Make's you feel as if your in it lol its good
Vocab could be upped a lil but its good
Hmm.......You Shud Say Fuck Text.......................
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Go To Audio...Its Doper
