ok...good beat choice...lool...wonder how u got that....singin is ok...lol...went off key a lil but ure not a singer...ok you come in...flow is good...lyrics seem personal rather than complex....second hook seems better...i like the singin actually...1st verse seemed a lil robotic in the middle...second seems much better...whats this bout ure dick throbbin lol.,....back to the song...i feelin this verse much more..presence more...likin the five source ent. line...u explained that to me last nite...right nice track...soryr forgot to mention multiss right here is the rest of what I was sayin:

Multis: were nice, liked the flow...good effect on the voices...it helped ure flow the multis

Delivery n Presence: This is always good..ure confident on the mic...

Emotion: A lil robotic first verse...but it picked up


Hook: 7/10
1st Verse: 7/10
2nd verse: 8.5/10

overall around 7.6789/10 lol

but nice track....

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