Odi et Amo
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IP:
Voted For: Apostrophe
Flow Intelligent
Wack verses with stupid punchlines have no chances of stopping me
This a dog fight, so ill put a paws to you like an apostrophe*
^nice name play in opener, feeling the overall bar 9/10
Fire shots from the pistol, rapid hits to the body will gut ya
Faggot, I'll work your mid-section like a Pilates instructor
^no real punch actually, more self-glorification 4/10
So dont post a verse man, Or you'll get stuck like a sticker
When you rap you get booze and i aint talking about liqour
^good wordplay in here, formed into punch, solid 7/10
Ya skills are ok at most and its funny that ya think ya posting realness
But if ya verses were really dope i'd have to overdose to feel it
^hmmmm not feeling it actually, no real hardhitting punch 5/10
My bars are similar to S.A.T's.... You're too stupid to test one
Like having sex with the grim reaper... You're fucking with death son
^hehe, liked this bar, good wordplay, hardhittin shit 8/10
My verses claim life, So now you're trying to feign death
I made my words 'play-right' so I'll have you exit 'stage-left'**
^good closer but not as hardhitting as bar above this one 6/10
Total: 39/60 = 65%
Apostrophe
Dude Your Talents Gone.. Sorry To Say.. Your A Wreck..
&& yea you were the only 3 time topical champ..
......................................but dawg this is text..
^good opener, bringing em down in a subtle way 8/10
Back In The Day You Could've Beaten Me... But I Know this is True..
When i started riding a bike.. i still hadnt fallen off as much as you..
^lmao...i actually chuckled at this one...funny 8/10
Been Here Long Enough.. But somehow.. Your just a ho..
That after 2 years.. hasnt shown improvement.
.........................................like re-runs of time allens show..
^again funny, nice comparison, pretty hardhitting 7/10
My Punches Are Frightening.. After This Here Comes The Terror..
Dude Shares A 1 bedroom Apartment W/Bill Buckner..
...............................Proves he's got no room for error
^liking this bar, finished em off nicely...7/10
Your Rhymes Are Cold Dun.. You've Been Told Son..
Your Jobs are like your win streaks.. you cant hold one
^lmao, chuckled with last line...funny shit 7/10
Apostrophe's On Top.. So Dude Just Stop The Hating..
&& I got Flow On Lock...................
But I'll Make Him Open Up After All These Combinations
^not really feelin closer in fact 4/10
Total: 41/60 = 68%
Close battle but I feel Apostrophe edged it out a bit more...
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