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Old 10-26-05, 03:03 PM   #8
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word.
first vere didnt seem to strong but it was good...
chorus is dope nice concept to it
2nd verse was pretty good...coulda sounded a lil better
chorus again nice concept and i liked the words to it
3rd verse ahh ending seemed stronger than the opening
felt some emotion in this.....pretty dope......decent vocab and wut not
1st n 3rd sounded best produced wise....but iono mayb its just me
pretty nice collab fellas
keep it up
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