listenin...not likin the hook atall...sorry dawg...it seems ure puttin on the accent...first verse...u gotta flow better...ure talkin too much.. its choppy...hook gettin a lil catchy now pretty nice..delivery is a natural thing with you...2nd verse...is a lil better.emotion better...shoutin too much...this is an ok track...ure best one...but still to me its 5/10 at the best...and thats on the real tip

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