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Old 10-26-05, 04:43 PM   #23
flow verse
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From: BOSTON
This was feedback posted for one mic

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Honestly i expect better from you one mic... problems i had with Micsachek ---- lines are way to stretch out need to make sure lines match up it will look better and it will help keep your flow in tact....also wordplay is played out.... way to basic ... but i give you a point on the attempt.... One Mic word of advise (wich i very much doubt you need) easy on the selfglorification... and since when was it cool to start a text battle with "yo yo"...never don't do that again...... your wordplay was also very basic ... and structure needs work..... both of you need to up you game up very much.... Just some honest feedback no HATE
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