ok listening....ive always loved this beat........

the way you started out on the track wasnt effective...you gotta learn to come in nice....cause just coming in nice can make the whole verse seem dope...

as the verse progresses....your presence goes away....you can barely even hear your voice as the song gets further into it......at the beginning your presence is ok.....but you gotta work on staying consistent with it.....act mad at the mic...and stay with the same voice/ delivery throughout the whole song......


just work with that for now....keep elevating.....word

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