man bro....i honestly never thought these words would be typed up on my keyboard....but....


you have improved


you actually resemble something of a decent flow on this....atleast most of its somewhat on beat......

keep working on your flow....it may take u a while....but i see improvements man....

after u get that down...then its down to delivery, presence.....and working on how to use your voice properly man......

keep working

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