Hmm..
This wuz ok too.Direct and str8 to the point.And I like that.Cuz a lotta niggas on this site like to post complex,wannabe shakespeare shit that give you a headache.
the content wuz cool..
Only thing you could prolly up is ur rhyming...maybe git some multis or add internals to fix a couple of little glitches in the flow.

And like I said before in the other thread...this one would sound good on audio.
It really needs that anger and shit..ya feel me?

So yea...keep at it..ya got a good style at this shit....