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Originally Posted by Triple_N
ok...I copped this jus blaze beat myself was gon spit to it.......ok u clearly a uk rapper..u accent wasn't too dominate early but it starts showing towards middle...which I aint a fan of uk accent...I always said it lacks fluidity....sounds like u fighting wit ya pronounciation to have ya words flow seemlessly together but the english way of speaking to me is naturally kaotic...sum know how to tone it down a bit u tried but not really working.........flow was basic an a tad choppy....delivery u opened wit intensity an strong..I was feeling u at jump but after first 4 bars u dropoff quickly...u lost that emotion that held my attention..I had to listen to it twice to catch lyrics cuz first listen I was jus goin thru motions..u completely lost my attention...lyrical u was ah'ight..nothing jumped out...u could flipped this topic so many ways but u took the predictable route......well all in all I wasn't feeling it, no hate son....but it jus wasn't working IMO...but stay up..u def got an upside......1
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