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Old 10-28-05, 10:07 AM   #7
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Elevated to something else? Haha, Murdz, dude, you're still stuck
Cause resetting your name doesn't change the fact you still suck
4...ok diss,a 'lil generic in my opinion tho
Fill up your garbage and step down, Im known to blast the queers
And I would get down to Biz.. but I've been above trash for years
5....ok
For real.. and on to the Living Legends.. let's look at what's noted
After I joined the squad you dropped from unreliable.. to unnoticed
6...if it's true...then yea..good.
Then you left.. but yo, let's keep it personal until I break your back
..Your custom title ain't the only Ka.Nek.Shun you'll face this match
4..bah,user title disses are gettin weak now.
You can't stand up to my punches.. while yours are just missing me
..Cause everybody knows a Bi match is guaranteed to be a victory
5...ok...
I saw your post about mental issues, now you getting hit hard dude
It's just sad that you've gone from trash to fucking retarded too
6...good diss
It'll be over soon.. so talk shit man, I'll just say fuck what you said
And I would do a punch with who've lost too..
..but I don't want to fill up this thread
5..ok,but i've heard similar lines to this too many times before.
It's simple.. I've won.. but to wrap this up, I'll just bend ya hoe
..So I'll stab this motherfucker with an arrow just to end this BO
6...ok..

This verse gon be off the dome while you steady studying ya prepared notes
Jut exposd ya bitch side, so give out ya dick rides to gain votes
3...too much filler
These hits are sickenin' like I got your brain on terminal restrictions
You talkin, "Mim's clappin and winnin", na its just you yappin in fiction
4...bah,boring
You must be a dwarf wit near sight, cant see me n will neva be at my height
u need a change in life, cant roc a forum much less have a career on tha mic
4...zzzzzzzzzz...spit a hot line
mimesis beatin me juss wont happen like seein Xzibit quitin drugs
How u claimin to be homophobic when you ask for a refund at strip clubs?
5..meh
Metaphors reign supreme in ya rhymes, but you got sad wordplay
So lets get grammatical. I'm killin this noun properly with my verb-play
6...creative,I'll give you that.
I realize you used to rip shit, but now even tha newbs know u fell off
Im guessin you well off wit rehearsals for commercials advertisin skin-so-soft
3..weak...
so Look, I torture dis whore more than Middle Ages warlords, it's my compulsion
One pass and I 'gassed' this wack half-assed bitch, he ran outta 'propulsion'
4...boring..

Ok..
Mimesis..
Not a spectacular verse from you.I'm always a big fan of disses over punchlines...but I felt some of yours were too generic,if you understand that.And you also ripped on his user title,and I ain't feel that cuz rippin on sig.,user title,or shit is like that is pretty gay now,in my opinion.
Bizzo..
Ur verse..wuz..simply put..Boring.You had too much filler as well.Saw you tried to put internals in there..but it didn't help your flow.U ain't use it right.Ur punches were bland..

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