Your flow is getting better each track, the first version of this you had was bad... but you pulled this off pretty well, the emotion - YOU GOTTA LEMME HEAR YOU FIERCE! hee hee. Your presence could be worked on, but that comes with practicing and dropping tracks. You'll eventually get to that level you want to be at. Lyrically, I know this just an entry track to the tourney, so I wasn't expecting something major in the lyrics field. But lyrically it was deso (decent).

One thing bout your flow is you start off simple and feeling the beat, then you get off in some spots.. but not bad, and this is the best I heard from you by far. So keep doing what you doin', you def elevating.
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