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Old 10-28-05, 02:56 PM   #10
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quality seems crisp


beat is decent

hook is weird with the delivery...and the lyrics seem annoying


verses...flows are good


but some lines forced in the 1st verse

and the start and stopping in a couple spots seemed sloppy

not bad...just needs polish


2nd...decent



6/10

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