I agree on the hook...it just sounds weird...can't quite put my finger on what's bothering me...

Not really feeling beat either, ain't easiest one to spit on and not really this type of track. Verses are good though, lyrics are pretty nice, flow is gettin there too...keep on working on it, it's gonna pay off eventually. You working at it and it shows too, you improving with your presence as well.

Keep at it man!

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