Loving the beat...

First dude: aight, good shit, flow is pretty good, fell off here and there cause you wanted to get too many words out there you know. Delivery might be upped a little, more fire in em you know. Lyrics are on point

Hook: good add-on but it needed this special touch to it, more hyped up vibe you know

Second dude: grimey voice, lyrics are good, flow is definitely on point but delivery gets bit monotone here and there. Started off pretty good but I wanted the verses to fit with the beat as in getting people hyped up ya know...

But overall solid shit y'all...hit me up bout that collab (aim, msn or yahoo.)

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