Intro is bad mixing shit, the things just overlap in bad way...just annoys me...fix the mixing and it'd be nice you know...

Your flow is on point, good delivery as well, it shows that this is an important topic for you. Lyrics are definitely suited for this type of track, people can relate to it, had some deep things in there.

The hook is nice, sometimes vocals are bit low, and they overlap in bad way here and there as well you know...good concept for hook though

Second verse same as first in fact, flow was consistent throughout entire thing. Presence is there without a doubt, I feel like you were building it up which is quite good. Fell off a little near the end but nothing bad though...

Solid song!

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