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Old 10-29-05, 08:51 AM   #9
Vaskez
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Poker face aint bluffing me, i'll straight flush your lines bro
& like yo sig
Give ya 2pairs of kicks to your spine and make you fold, hoe
^^OMG, sorry man, but this was sooo simple compared to what I was expecting from you. The rhyme was extremely lazy, lines bro, fold hoe? Come on. And the punch was the most played possible against him, given that he's been rocking that sig/avatar for around a year and a half

vs.


I've been gamblin' wit peeps n' ya career needs to stop
Cuz I could play poker for years...
... and not see a bigger flop
^^pretty simple again, single syllable rhyming which I try to avoid whenever possible, but at least this wasn't completely played and corny

v/DTH
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