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Old 10-29-05, 09:40 AM   #10
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Voted For: Drakel

Drakel

came up with a catch phrase, too bad its just gay, bitch
trying too hard man ...poo pow just looks like you're pushing shit
^hehe nice opener, pretty funny stuff 7/10

you're an udder failure, toast you up, watch your remains spread
no margerine for error here cause you're just butter off dead
^cool bar, okay wordplay 6/10

check out the map of his life, can't help but laugh at every section
there's no way you're a legend, when your future aint even in the right direction
^funny shit, especially first line was good 7/10

so i'm chomping down on this shrimp, kicking his tail to the trash bin
you all will see feud, and me mussle away from his failed ass a win
^good good, nothing special, just solid 6/10

no need to get childish, but you're shit is gay, no one ever looks
cause you balou more cock, than a gay version of jungle book
^haha, closer killed it...8/10

Total: 34/50 = 68%


Premanition

‘Free Bird’ trapped in his barz looking for dead heights
You moving on the path to success with no head lights
^first line is good, using his sig and ish 7/10

Poetical? hardly and even that outlook won’t scar~me
……Drakel couldn’t Produce a Hit like Talib Kweli..!!!
^decent decent, nothing wow though...6/10

Bitch you bin wack so long, filling cracks like Thongs
Damn! Some of RV got a taste~in ‘twats’ like tongues
^hehe, liking this bar, good shit man, punches 8/10

Drak more frustratin than them calls from sales personel
Like a superscious mind, we’d prefer this taled burden fell
^good closer, not as good as bar before this one tho 6/10

Total: 27/40 = 67,5%

Close battle right here, I feel both didn't try their best because I've seen far better.
I'ma give it to Drakel, I felt he edged it out by a very little bit...
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