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Old 10-29-05, 12:20 PM   #13
Willa
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
 
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

ok this was a close ass battle i almost didnt vote


Unscripted describes how you should leave your lyrics
I'm gonna have to end and diminish your high hope spirit
ok line punch wise loving the multis and vocab 6/10
You can't drop a quick 6?,How you expect to collide
It makes me laugh, The so called skills you provide
good personal good rhyme scheme 7.5/10
Sittin, sayin I look whack,Your Paul Wall,Sittin Sidewayz
You cant comprehend? Thats why your lookin dayzed
probably ur worst like 5/10
For you this battle must have been a great calamity
Your verse is a horror worse than the one in Amity*
decent line liked the vocab 6.5/10
When it to comes to you and me I will always precede
Its over already, you should just start to receid
good vocba ok closer 7/10
id liek to see more multis and personals work on ur wordplay uve elveated with ur vocab and rhyme scheme props

This wack cat here's a wannabe, and he'll even admit it
Says he's "interested" in pimpin, but that aint how he live it*
decent line 1st line was all filler though bad setup 6/10
His punches dont hit, even his name dont mean shit
Cuz we already kno that he's the one n onlii bitch**
played personals bad setup again 5/10
B's thinkin he's dope, but i'ma put him in his station
He drops it "like" its hot, thats cuz he got "imagination"
not a good line no wordplay lol 4.5/10
ok you have good lines but your setups are wear if you could nail that youd win easy no doubt upp ur vpocab and you have a problem wiht wordplay last line wasnt really good wordplay work on personals not bad at all props
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