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Old 10-29-05, 12:57 PM   #6
Ebircs
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beat is ok...

could use better mixing ...jus a lil bit
good comercail flow type shit..lyrics is decent,not to deep but wordplay is their..
fuck bitches that fuck bitches...nice line man

2nd dude...nice voice,i think u should flow a bit faster..not a whole lota emotion their,decent lyrics,ya'll rapped through tha chorus tho...







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