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Old 10-29-05, 01:06 PM   #16
Dickard.
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Uncsripted-Your verse was quit good for a new cat...you had some good concepts and good wordplay problem is i dont think it flowed right...and breaking it down..it all comes down to flow.....if it dont flow...it aint god...nuff said..........

Tha 1 an onlii b-your verse was mediocore...ive seen better from you....you had some good concepts worded poorly but it flowed good...overall punches in this battle were not too good...but it really came down to flwo cuz everything else was missing.......

v/tha 1 an onlii

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