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Old 10-29-05, 01:21 PM   #29
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Originally Posted by TitoBronsky
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213012


peep that track fiya... you wont be disappointed...


Long time since I heard a Q + Tito collab...

Q- 1st part: don't like how you started out, but ya flow is pretty straight and pickin up at the end, lyrics decent...

Tito - 1st part: I like your presence, quality is meh, but flow is pickin up..

Q- 2nd part: flow is more consistent than at first, but rhyme scheme almost repetitive

Tito - 2nd part: ya lyrics pickin up and flow on point...

Q - 3rd part: wasn't feeling your delivery on this part, but the Alice in Wonderland and followin inners/internal rhymes portion was creative

Tito - 3rd part: lyrics I'm feeling ya flow coming up good on this part

Q - 4th part: flow went choppy at one portion, other than that not bad, just your delivery

Tito - 4th part: Ya emotion could use some work, for both of you, y'all soundin relaxed on the intense portions *red light, green light line I wasn't feelin, just seemed like filler*

Q - 5th part: Midas line (nice set-up), flow is the same as before

Tito - 5th part: ya flow started driftin a bit, but ya emotion was strugglin to pick up..

Aight the idea is nice with the 4 then 4 thing... me and S e n s e r were gonna do a back and forth track like that but 8 by 8. Haven't heard from him in a while. lol

The outro mad loud.

Overall: The quality levels were real different but nice blend of voices and style. Tito your flow picked up easy, this the best I ever heard you drop. Q this ain't near best flow I heard you with, nor delivery, but your lyrics picked up from the last I heard of you. Your Alice & Wonderland line and Midas line stood out... The only thing I wasn't feeling much was a few random lines Tito used to keep a good flow and the emotion. I wish both of y'all was a little more hype on this. If y'all do a back and forth track, then you want the energy to build throughout the track and shock the listeners ya feel? But yeah nice collabo and beat choice. Stay up.
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