Voted For: Illist

yea, this verse was a lil more on the complex side....

I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla'
use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record..
.............and beat the pro portion outta ya

^pretty decent


punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation-
It's a parent ya wack...
.... like havin' kids from masturbation..

^str8 wordplay

it was to the point....good flow...i dun like the structure, though....punches were there...pretty kew....nothing was like OMFG!!....but, yu made up with the wordplay and such


ThatNigga:....i wasnt feeling ya opening bars...getting pussy is -eh- in battle form unless its stands out....which in this case it didnt...and the punches didnt realli hit him directly...ya flow was here and there, aswell

...iLList had the better verse....plain and simple

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