Listening...

Beat is coo...verse comes in...delivery is lacking...you sound very monotonous. Flow is decent, multies is coo...but damn...that delivery is killin this. Oh wait it picks up...actually it picks up quite a bit. But it's still not the greatest delivery...anyway, lyrics are coo, overall a pretty good track. Whoa...what the fuck was that at the end..? Haha...whatever...

Keep it up.

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