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Old 10-29-05, 02:30 PM   #5
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wow....holla-front type shit


WHY THE FUCK ARE YALL SLEEPING ON THIS?!


yo, the plot was iLL and the way yu carried this out was sick as HELL....ohh my goodness...imagery was HOT...iLLest piece i've seen from yu DQ

State of dim despair shows throughout trembling hands
Pain pierces through my heart, it aches by her demands
Why can I not reach her, she cannot even hear me speak!
Or just perceive my presence when I touch her pink cheek
As glistering tears gently escape her green esoteric eyes
When she suddenly throws off her one obscure disguise
And there she stands…naked…only covered by pale skin
To fill the emptiness within and commit most devilish sin
I try to get nearer but I fail…she stands staring in mirror
Blank gaze as she clasps to the knife, I start to fear her

^LOVELY...damn near flawless, realli brought the storyline out...gave it an emotional depth, yo

haha, if i could kiss yu...i would....nyce werk mami

see, this is why Living Legends....is iLL...we got heads producing drops like this....
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