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Old 10-29-05, 05:12 PM   #18
Big Jay R
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Vote:1 and onlii

The one and onlii
Yours was longer and he kept up your scheme scheme. Granted you jumped around a lot and didnt flow from one punch to the other but still its better than the stuff Undescried provided;

Best line:
For you this battle must have been a great calamity
Your verse is a horror worse than the one in Amity*

Worst Line:
Sittin, sayin I look whack,Your Paul Wall,Sittin Sidewayz
You cant comprehend? Thats why your lookin dayzed


Undescribed: Nobody really takes their profiles serious and thats all you went on i think it was a dumb way to find information to write a verse. Your rhyme was good , there just wasnt a lot of complex words and it was kinda jabby more then punches. I only really liked your first line.

Best line:
This wack cat here's a wannabe, and he'll even admit it
Says he's "interested" in pimpin, but that aint how he live it*

Worst Line:
is punches dont hit, even his name dont mean shit
Cuz we already kno that he's the one n onlii bitch**