Not to actually really rag on your verse. But it was weak.

Most of the punches were just plain, they lacked anything really hard hitting.
I've actually seen you do a lot better, these just seem like some off the top 30 second punches, basically like you're writing the first thing that comes to your head. The flow was nice, you had a few multies you threw in, but you need to come more creative and shit, lay off so many played concepts.

In particular...

Kon.Tay.Juz stay battlin newbies, Against him im savage and moody
Fighting dirty. Coming with cheaper shots than Amateur movies
DQ get dissed in this verse and she can run home with some thrills
Ya know my OM's are like doctors patients, theyre known to come ill
After this is done, Im'a be walking away with bragging rights
Cuz like porn vets in virgin roles, Veracity is just acting tight

^^ those were all weak, and the concepts were played to fuck.

You either need to up your shit, or just actually put some effort into dissing people if you actually want these open mics to be dope.

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