flow is probably the best part of it but fell off towards the end... and your voice is pretty good too.

But the delivery sucked.. you've got reading-lyrics-off-paper sydnrome. Theres no meaning in the words that you're saying, you're just saying them. Try to at least semi-learn the lyrics you're reading off by heart, and when you're spitting them think about what you're saying.

Your shit isnt bad though. You have a lot of potential.

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