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Old 10-30-05, 12:10 AM   #9
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playing, vocals need to be up a bit. You sounding dope ma. seriously. lyrics okay.. flow is good, like the switch ups thru out. you can roll lyrics off your tounge nicley

like the beat, you need a outro on this though, it cuts off to early, right when i thought id hear another verse.

this is good.

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