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Old 10-30-05, 02:23 AM   #13
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Flow is real good, near the end you seem to get bored with your own shit though rofl...I dunno, it's like you're thinking "oh well, i'm almost done sooooo". You lazy chica hehe...

Lyrics are good, I don't find em too basic for this type of track in fact. Delivery, yeh...that could've been better but that's usually the hardest part to get right I think. I was expecting some nice intro or outro shit too girl, would've added something to track prolly. And show me the arrogance in your voice, you know you can do it...

Good shit girl
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