Yeah, I'm feeling this piece.

The overall imagery and emotion of the piece was top, you also had a nice use of wordplay throughout the verse which added more depth to the verse. But it was used at a level that it didn't take the verse from a topical style piece to a more text-like piece. Rhyme scheme was cool and everything, there is always room for improvement there though. And the vocabs were real nice, but you could always beef them up.

Still, this was a real cool piece.

OVERALL: 7/10

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