well, honestly that was a some nice consistent shit
it was definately worth the read...flowed well throughtout
liked the wordyness of most parts, it kinda read on like a historical
account of how the crew members came about...funny shit
liked how it was non stop with personals n full mentions
of all imformation, (the way it should be done)
basically this piece was dope
prolly the best ive read all morning....
the only sections i wasnt feelin was a couple bars that were
really forced in the ryhmin sense....some concepts that were flipped well
was the main reason i kept readin on through the entire thing.
good way to keep the reader interested in such a long piece..
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!