Intro: Dooms... get at me for one of them right thurr!!!! Feeling the intro... he was on some DJ kayslay / papoose shyt...lol
Beat: Grimy... just how i like 'em...
1st verse... simple lyrics... kinda like when i did my Brooklyn joint but on a different flow... up ya quality on ya verse to Doom's level cuz it definitely sounded different between the two... words were clear... just soundy ..iono... ashy?... almost raspy like....
Hook:... too much coulda been done with this for you to settle for that... get creative with ya hooks... they connect ya verses and add life to ya tracks
2nd Verse: same as the first... safe track... especially if that's what they into in ya hood... do you man.... stay up
decent overall... 7/10
ehhh and that's not a lisp y'all hearing... it's da hiss in his track... just needs to compress and de-ess that shyt ... that all