I'd have to agree with kontro, Your flow is a lil choppy and as well as your delievery, delivery aint to bad but it seems like your flow messes that up. emotion needs to be upped some more as well, though it wasn't bad. nice voice once you get that emotion goin you'll sound dope. lyrics were good as well.

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rtf here:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212599

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