iight, let's see........

intro- iwas definitely feelin it....... i don't know why......

1st verse- iight, flow was too uptight, u sound like u practiced too long instead of havin fun with it........ nice voice, u sorta sound like Juelz Santana........

2nd verse- wasn't really feelin your actual lyrics as much....... sounded like it flowed better than the 1st, but rhymes were so-so..........

overall- 7.5/10........ good beat, good intro....... uptight flow and sorta simple rhymes got u tho.......

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

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