Voted For: Kamze

Kamze

Ok..your flow was off at points,try shorting your lines.And I didn't like the one personal you had in there...mainly because I used an accomplish line on technique in my battle with him.And your wordplay is good..I like it...it's just..

"only time you blah-blah-blah is when you blah-blah-blah"
OR
"doing blah-blah-blah is only time you blah-blah-blah"

^that seemed to be your style in this battle.And that's just generic.So,try to unleash your punches in a different style...

Your not the worst on this site...so..yea..keep at it.

Technique

Just as I expected.I see your using the "bar-to-bar" transition..just like me...so that's good.Your flow was good,I'll give you that.But ur content was not.Like...Your lyrics will turn him into shreddies..?That's just chessy.And wtf@ the teddy line..how old are you?.

Make punches of real things that people would care about...not some gay shit like teddy bears.

Vote-Kamze...for actually throwing some decent punches.


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