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Old 10-30-05, 05:50 PM   #2
Triple_N
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okay typing as I listen.........you def overdubbed the opening comes in too loud....u really need to chnage up ya flow...u come wit same flow every track.....lyrics is kinda preachy....decent but common for this subject...very common.....delivery was upped hyper than u usually do..next dude......got a decent delivery but lyrically very weak......flow is koo nothing spectacular..too many addlibs..they kinda outta place on a track like this.....nothing impressive about dude.....jus decent.......beat is good an really carries song IMO.......got a nice sample on hook......overall I was expecting more but not bad
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