Poor by monetary means but I’m rich in pride…
Nice & Outgoing on the outside but a bitch inside…
^^this aint make sense i think you wored it wrong

the hook is good but i think the syllabel count is off a little bit here for the verses to match the hook on the same beat.i like the whole rhyme its no lyrical more just real and to the point kinda like what shyne or game does on a track.overall this was a nice drop all around but ive seen better from you this is a 8/10 for most but only a 7/10 for you.

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