This is dope, just like a lot of your pieces..you use a lot of poetic aspects...i love the metaphors..the imagery..all of it....the only thing that could hbave been better in this is word choice in some parts....it seems like you sort of rushed through it in a few parts...but other than that..it's dope as hell...i might have to vote this OM of the month

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