like always vp your style was enjoyable to read,1st paragraph i thought
was sick, really connects with the reader....vocab n structure were good
i was feelin the entire verse, as for the emotion you protrayed it was evident
you kept it on track...good shit....
fav line was-
I keep writin’ my rhymed lines in time for you to decipher…
Inside I’m diein’… So I metaphor the hell out of every cypher…
^^almost wish i wrote it...lol