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Old 10-31-05, 04:49 AM   #9
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I ain't gonna get involved in this, purely commenting on the track itself, not focusing on the content...

Intro...hmmmm...not feeling, it's hectic and not very clear either...could've been more creative too...

Hook: simple but it keeps going on in ya mind you know, it's catchy I guess...basic but catchy hehe...

Verse: aight, coming at her with some nice punches in here. You guys were cool so you know you got dirt on each other I guess, I feel like you didn't put everything out there though. Flow had unique feel to it, I was definitely liking it and it stayed on point too. Voice doesn't bother me (someone above me mentioned that), I think you got good voice.

Outro: better than intro but nothing too special though

Solid diss even though I don't agree (to learn rankings in RG btw)
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