Voted For: Ryda

Ryda

Well,it's clear to me that your new to this.
First off,don't explain your shit.Just makes it look herbish.In real life,you wouldn't spit your bars and then explain it would you?NO,you wouldn't.That "look down/shower" line was shit,to say the least.And you had a decent concept with the rah-ta-tat thing,but you worded it too simplistic.
You got a lot of work to do..

KriZ

Wow...you only had one punchline.And that was the "he doesn't know a clit" one,which sucked because it sounds newbish.You sound like some little kid saying something like that.The rest of your verse was all threats.The point of a battle is to diss the oppenent.Saying you'll kick his ass like Jet Li doesn't diss him in any way.

Vote-Ryda...for actually having a lot of punches..

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