Voted For: Arsen

Wren-O-Phase

Ok..your flow was a lil iffy.That 1st bar,2nd line was stretched the fuck out.Only bar in your verse that seemed to flow was the 3rd one.You had a numerous
amount of played punches.Like the spit on the toilet/drop shit..and the geek line in the 1st bar.Your best punchline was the one personal you had.

Arsen

Ok,you seemed to complex.Try to be more direct.I don't like it when people have to explain every line in their verses.And don't put links in your verse.People hate clicking on those.The best line in your verse was probably the sum line.So,in the future,just try not to be so technical that you end up having to explain everything in ya verse.

Vote-Arsen for harder hitting punches.

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