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beat is kinda busy for my tastes...
kinda fast
hook seems like u did it out of necessity...
ur flow seems pretty decent...not bad...
vocals a touch loudish
rhyming adequate
u had a nice structure but didn't deliver it smoothly on this beat in some spots...think JAY Z the next time u try that OOCHIE WALLY flow scheme
not a bad track...jus needs polish
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