ehh @ beat...never really liked it that much....

trips hook is nice...like his delivery on this

1st verse...delivery is nice.....lyrically...its nice....

only a couple spots where voice seemed a lil shaky....but overall...dope ass verse..good job


2nd verse....LOL @ your quality tizz....get a new mic foo....lol...

im liking your flow...when your started it was nice...kinda became shaky as u progressed....thatll progress with time though....delivery was ok...cant really tell with that shitty quality lol....

3rd.....
lol.....@ your lines....ewww...lol...

i felt like your flow could been a lil more polished....delivery was good...but i think you shoulda came with a diff delivery....like more mellowed out...

other than that...good verse....

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