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Old 11-01-05, 01:40 AM   #7
.Ike.
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beat is coo......

you come in real nice...
lyrically this is real good....better lyrically than most anything u hear nowadays....
flow is good....i only heard 1 spot on the 2nd verse...where i thought u kinda hesitated...and took too long of a breathe...other than that...flow was mos def. on point well.....delivery is good....you come with nice energy on this....

liking the speech as the hook....

overall this was a nice solid track....good job..
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