Voted For: Illist

Withersman

OK,too many threats in your verse.Like..I see the wordplay you did in the 1st bar,but you didn't put it in a way that dissed.Saying u'll hang him doesn't diss at all.And nearly ur whole verse was made of threats too.The girlfriend line was the only decent line you had,and that was becuz it actually dissed.

Illist

First off,I think you overused the 3 line method in your verse.But other than that,it was a pretty good verse.Esspeccially the 2nd bar wit the girl line..that punch hit hard.Only line I wasn't feelin was the last one.Cause it seemed to self glorify more than diss...

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