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Old 11-01-05, 06:59 PM   #4
Dickard.
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Voted For: Flow Intelligent

Flow Intelligent-Your verse was structured pretty good your flow was on point and everything was present.Your verse consisted of good punches that really were noticebale and good personals..you had good attacks at your opponent that stood out and your wordplay was quite amusing...pretty good piece from you man

best lines:
You a Killa, Natural? Then come test me... I got guns that embellish
But on the real i think ya hot dog... Especially on a bun with relish
overall: 8/10

Natural Killa-Your verse was structured the same as usual but your flow was off to me...i feel you poorly set up ur verse for flow really bad flow. Your punches were pretty decent i was fealing them a bit. Personals were ok but there were a couple of lines that jus tdidnt do it for me i feel you lacked more than your opponent in all honesty man

best lines :
I'd git to hidin if i wuz a trigga like u,who's git shot up with glocks for struttin
u been merked so many "times" cuz ur style bassically "clocks" up nothing
overall: 6/10

v/flow intelligent

no hate on this vote just basing my opinion
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